Capturing the right notes in the room
“I wish, times a billion, that I could carry you around in my pocket full time. Or at the very least, will you to be in every similar story room or meeting I will ever be in, and in the reverse, have ever been in.”
Natasha Pincus, Writer/Director/Producer
First reader
It was a pleasure working with Jonathan who read, and gave notes on my script, ‘Revelations‘. Jonathan delivered 7 pages of in depth, contextual notes that allowed me to take the project to the next level, where it was accepted into a prestigious ‘Australians in Film’ Untapped program.
Travis Akbar, Writer/Director
It’s your (award winning) story
Jonathan is one of the first people I trust to read and give feedback on any new work. He has a very thorough understanding of the screenwriting craft and provides detailed notes which address both minor issues (such as formatting) and larger concerns (structure, content, themes, etc.)
Most importantly, Jonathan knows how to give feedback constructively, framing it in a way that is gentle but clear and instructive, highlighting strengths while also pointing out potential weaknesses and offering suggestions for improvement. He gears his feedback toward making YOUR story better, without any feeling of judgement or creative imposition. I would highly recommend his script consulting services to any screenwriters looking for comprehensive, actionable feedback.
Melanie Easton, Writer Director, Dragon’s Breath, winner Best Short Film AWG
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